long purple shadows cast by boulders. a silver flute plays chopin inside the top of my head which is a cave, there in the distance, with bats ratcheting. deep red velvet pain, the color is like blood, but at least it is alive, it is red.
this fabric, so luminous, alluring, is untouchable. it is draped in a room painted by vermeer, carefully crumpled into a circle by little feet of cats, arranged in a brass ring basket, shaped like a crown, plumped with goose feathers. and the room is in some castle in the clouds. only the delft geographer could imagine what all these things are for. for susan where you once were, is no more, unsettled scattered across the landscape of a hollow place where a friend is laid to rest.



12 comments:
goodness gracious, Kathi! such an overwhelming composition - i am intrigued, and lost for words...
yup overwhelmed is just that - kind of constructed in shards
So poignant and yet beautiful! It does seem to be constructed in shards.
thanx gabrielle: head like a batcave, rocks falling falling, a compacted universe of shardware.
I am struck by the room painted by Vermeer. That is an exceptional image. I also love that the blood is like fabric. Brilliant!
he painted compositions so camera-like, so real, amazing isnt it? thanx selma, i love what you say
the sound and colour of this poem is so rich tipota... keeps me coming back for repeated readings.
thanks so much graham!
So sorry about your friend tipota - big hugs from me.
thanx gabrielle hugs back to you
Wonderful poem, beautiful, tipota - sorry to hear such bad news
thanx ash! i've begun to find peace with it, thanx
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